50 word fiction;

"Her eyes lit up. 'Chocolate ice cream!' she said. 'But that isn't the answer' he said, squeezing her arm 'listen to me more carefully and you may learn something.' now she felt tears on her neck as he pulled her close. She breathed in his nicotine breath. 'silly' he said."

thinking of ideas.

Brief notes on:
three main parts of the story/possible shots.

Picture one;

for this picture I was trying to show the "nicotine" and the quote within the 50 words which I believe is the main part 'listen to me more carefully and you may learn something.

I Incorporated cigarettes and burns on paper- which symbolizes the nicotine and could connote that someones advice to learn something from them if they'd listen better was not listened to and then their actions then burned them in return to their ignorance.
I edited the photo so that the colours were brown and orange-y keeping close to the idea of fire, burning and smoke- the tone is dark and miserable which in-turn makes the photo and the message that the photo shows quite haunting.

"Her eyes lit up. 'Chocolate ice cream!' she said.

"now she felt tears on her neck as he pulled her close. "

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'silly' he said."